diff --git a/pep-0675.rst b/pep-0675.rst
index 3365f147173..640452a3cde 100644
--- a/pep-0675.rst
+++ b/pep-0675.rst
@@ -25,10 +25,13 @@ accept arbitrary literal string types such as ``Literal["foo"]`` or
 Motivation
 ==========
 
-A common security vulnerability is for a program to include
-user-controlled data in a command it executes. For example, a naive
-way to look up a user record from a database is to accept a user id
-and insert it into a predefined SQL query:
+Powerful APIs that execute SQL or shell commands often recommend that
+they be invoked with literal strings, rather than arbitrary user
+controlled strings. There is no way to express this recommendation in
+the type system, however, meaning security vulnerabilities sometimes
+occur when developers fail to follow it. For example, a naive way to
+look up a user record from a database is to accept a user id and
+insert it into a predefined SQL query:
 
 ::
 
@@ -157,25 +160,28 @@ example:
 
 Notice that the user did not have to change their SQL code at all. The
 type checker was able to infer the literal string type and complain
-only in case of violations. The ``Literal[str]`` type is also useful
-in other cases where we want strict command-data separation, such as
-when building shell commands or when rendering a string into an HTML
-response without escaping (eg. via Django's ``mark_safe``
-function). Overall, this combination of strictness and flexibility
-makes it easy to enforce safer API usage in sensitive code without
-burdening users.
+only in case of violations.
+
+``Literal[str]`` is also useful in other cases where we want strict
+command-data separation, such as when building shell commands or when
+rendering a string into an HTML response without escaping (see
+`Appendix A: Other Uses`_). Overall, this combination of strictness
+and flexibility makes it easy to enforce safer API usage in sensitive
+code without burdening users.
 
 Usage statistics
 ----------------
 
 In a sample of open-source projects using ``sqlite3``, we found that
-``conn.execute`` was called `~67%
+``conn.execute`` was called `~67% of the time
 <https://grep.app/search?q=conn%5C.execute%5C%28%5Cs%2A%5B%27%22%5D&regexp=true&filter[lang][0]=Python>`_
-of the time with a safe string literal and `~33%
+with a safe string literal and `~33% of the time
 <https://grep.app/search?current=3&q=conn%5C.execute%5C%28%5Ba-zA-Z_%5D%2B%5C%29&regexp=true&filter[lang][0]=Python>`_
-of the time with an unsafe, dynamically-built local variable. Using
-this PEP's literal string type along with a type checker would have
-prevented ``execute`` from being called in such an unsafe manner.
+with a potentially unsafe, local string variable. Using this PEP's
+literal string type along with a type checker would prevent the unsafe
+portion of that 33% of cases (ie. the ones where user controlled data
+is incorporated into the query), while seamlessly allowing the safe
+ones to remain.
 
 Rationale
 =========
@@ -223,13 +229,13 @@ string?
 We want to specify that the value must be of some type
 ``Literal[<...>]`` where ``<...>`` is some string. This is what
 ``Literal[str]`` represents. ``Literal[str]`` is the "supertype" of
-all literal string types. Any particular literal string such as
-``Literal["foo"]`` or ``Literal["bar"]`` is compatible with
-``Literal[str]``, but not the other way around. The "supertype" of
-``Literal[str]`` itself is ``str``. So, ``Literal[str]`` itself is
-compatible with ``str``, but not the other way around. In effect, this
-PEP just introduces a type in the type hierarchy between
-``Literal["foo"]`` and ``str``.
+all literal string types. In effect, this PEP just introduces a type
+in the type hierarchy between ``Literal["foo"]`` and ``str``. Any
+particular literal string such as ``Literal["foo"]`` or
+``Literal["bar"]`` is compatible with ``Literal[str]``, but not the
+other way around. The "supertype" of ``Literal[str]`` itself is
+``str``. So, ``Literal[str]`` is compatible with ``str``, but not the
+other way around.
 
 Note that a ``Union`` of literal types is naturally compatible with
 ``Literal[str]`` because each element of the ``Union`` is individually
@@ -523,8 +529,13 @@ match:
     s: str
     x3: str = foo(s)  # Third overload.
 
+
 Backwards Compatibility
------------------------
+=======================
+
+``Literal[str]`` is acceptable at runtime, so
+this doesn't require any changes to the Python runtime itself. :pep:`586`
+already backports ``Literal``, so this PEP does not need to change it.
 
 As :pep:`PEP 586 mentions
 <586#backwards-compatibility>`,
@@ -553,18 +564,12 @@ annotating it as ``x: Literal[str]``:
     x: Literal[str] = "hello"
     expect_literal_str(x)
 
-Runtime behavior
+
+Runtime Behavior
 ================
 
 This PEP does not change the runtime behavior of ``Literal``.
 
-Backwards compatibility
-=======================
-
-Backwards compatibility: ``Literal[str]`` is acceptable at runtime, so
-this doesn't require any changes to the Python runtime itself. :pep:`586`
-already backports ``Literal``, so this PEP does not need to change it.
-
 
 Rejected Alternatives
 =====================